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Second Eyes Editorial

Services open on 11/16/2025. In the meantime, the Word Wrangling blog and free resources are available.

Professional editing and constructive critique for your OUTLINE, WORK IN PROGRESS, SYNOPSIS, or QUERY LETTER.

Discuss your current writing project in a 15-minute ONLINE Q&A session. It’s free!

Second Eyes for the writer

Increase your novel's range and impact

A Second Eyes assessment focuses on construction, not demolition.

  • What could engage more readers?
  • Is the reader given a Point Of View with ample sensory and emotional impact?
  • Does the narrative sustain focus and action that keeps pages turning?
  • Where are the strongest and weakest plot points?

A second pair of eyes will find ways to strengthen your story!

Your writing is ready for Second Eyes

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Send any or all of these:

  • Outline
  • Brief synopsis
  • Detailed story treatment
  • Excerpt - early draft
  • Excerpt - polished draft

Minimal formatting:

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