A Second Eyes assessment focuses on construction, not demolition.
- What could engage more readers?
- Is the reader given a Point Of View with ample sensory and emotional impact?
- Does the narrative sustain focus and action that keeps pages turning?
- Where are the strongest and weakest plot points?
A second pair of eyes will find ways to strengthen your story!
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Send any or all of these:
- Outline
- Brief synopsis
- Detailed story treatment
- Excerpt - early draft
- Excerpt - polished draft
Minimal formatting:
- .DOCX (preferred) or .RTF
- Any web-safe font(s)
