Constructive critique and fast fixes for your NOVEL, NONFICTION, OUTLINE, or QUERY LETTER.

Discuss your current writing project in a 15-minute ASK THE EDITOR session. It’s free!

Second Eyes for

PLANNING

your novel or memoir

Details FYI

For all documents you send us, we recommend but do not require:

  • 12-point font
  • Double spacing
  • One-inch margins top and bottom
  • 1.25-inch margins left and right
  • File types: DOCX or RTF
  • Please limit individual file sizes to 3 MB.

Our recommended settings yield an estimated 250 words per 8½ by 11” page. Query letters are often single-spaced, but the draft query letter you send for critique may be double-spaced.

If you upload files in other formats, we will try to convert them into Microsoft Word. This allows us to include feedback and suggestions in the same file. Our response will also include a PDF file that is readable or printable without Microsoft Word software.

If we cannot work with a file, we will cancel that order item and refund the original payment source.

File uploads can be done from the Checkout Page, the last step when placing an order. The top right corner of that page has a blue box with a white “Choose Files” button. When you click that button, a file selection window opens, and you can upload one or more files.

You should upload a copy, not the original file, because we do not guarantee the return of the original file.

You will receive a second email within five days of your order. It will confirm receipt of files we can read and review, or it will request that you re-upload the document.

To re-upload a file, use the form on the Contact Page. It includes a Choose File button. The order number requested there is optional but appreciated.

We confirm the file size of any part of an order that specifies a page count. If a file exceeds the amount purchased, we will work with the number of words purchased.

Here’s the formula we use:
PAGE QUANTITY * 275 = # OF WORDS PURCHASED

When you send us DOCX or TXT files, we open them in Microsoft Word then add comments and recommendations.

PDF (Portable Document Format)

We send a PDF version of the file we have annotated. That way, if you do not have Microsoft Word, you can view and print our comments and recommendations using any of these apps:

  • Browsers (Mac or Windows computers)
    Microsoft Edge, Chrome, and Firefox browsers can open PDFs directly.
  • Adobe Acrobat Reader (Mac or Windows computers)
    Adobe Reader is free software that lets you view and print PDFs.
  • Preview app (Mac computers)
    Double-click the PDF file, and it should open in Preview, the default viewer for PDFs.
  • File Explorer app (Windows computers)
    Find the file using File Explorer app, then double-click it.

DOCX (Microsoft Word format)

We also send the annotated file in DOCX format for further editing if you have Microsoft Word.

All Second Eyes critiques involve two or more readings of your work. During the first read-through, we annotate comments and recommendations. The second read-through follows a rubric.

The editorial rubrics we developed are structured to provide a full range of practical observations and ideas for each type of critique.

Critiques of fiction excerpts (5 – 20 pages) and nonfiction include a Voice Analysis Summary. Your voice brings a distinct style and tone to your writing. Second Eyes will share what that conveys and suggest ways to build on or refine it.

Fiction critiques of more than 20 pages receive a full Voiceprint Report, which expands on the summary to also consider how your author’s voice is present in character action and dialog.

Policies

We reserve the right to decline services for any submitted file. We typically reject content that involves plagiarism, explicit sexual material, extreme violence, or animal cruelty. Other factors may also lead to refusal, though we won’t provide specific reasons.

If a file is declined, a full refund will be issued for that item.

Refunds are issued for individual files, and only for these reasons:

  • Service Exceptions
  • If the file is in a format our software cannot process.

We will not share your plot, character descriptions, outline, or any other content you send us unless you request that your work be shared.

You can always direct us to erase the data we hold about your work, excluding information we must keep for administrative, legal, or security purposes.

More Second Eyes services

Outlining
Fiction in Progress
Nonfiction Critique
Promotion
Coaching

Premise and themes

Price range: $25.00 through $40.00

The PREMISE explains a core idea in a few sentences or pages, while one or more THEMES explain the meaning of that core idea.

Character development pages

$7.00
  • Observations and recommendations about each character’s motivation, story arc, and more
  • Priced per double-spaced page
Your CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT notes might include physical descriptions and demographics. It’s good to know what makes a character unique. The roles and story arcs of major characters are no less important! Ideally, your thoughts about the lead characters should consider the obstacles they face, the ways that they respond, and why.

Backstory pages

Original price was: $7.00.Current price is: $6.25.

Priced per double-spaced page.

Well-placed BACKSTORY details can rescue a reader from confusion. A character’s needs, attitude, and page one circumstances require explanation. As author, you can consider those details in advance. Second Eyes can help you pinpoint essential details and recommend where to salt them into your work, to keep the plot moving.

360° planning

$95.00

Observations, recommendations, and a rubric report based on our reading of up to 20 pages.

A 360° PLANNING PACKAGE can be one or more files with your selected premise, themes, character development notes, and backstory pages.
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